My Stepmom Baked Me Cookies. I Said My Brother And I Ate Them. She Shook, “your Brother Too?”
Dr. Graves explained that without knowing what specific poison or toxin we’d consumed, they were treating us broadly while waiting for lab results that would take several hours. He said based on the timeline, we’d eaten the cookies about ninety minutes ago.
We were in the optimal window for intervention, but we’d need to stay for observation and further treatment depending on what the tests revealed. A detective arrived at the hospital around 5:30 p.m., maybe two hours after we’d first arrived.
She introduced herself as Detective Angela Hworth, nineteen years with the county sheriff’s department, specializing in domestic crimes and poisoning cases. She had the tired, knowing eyes of someone who’d seen the worst of what family members could do to each other.
She asked if I felt well enough to give a statement, and I nodded, glancing at Oliver, who was in the bed next to mine. He was finally calm after the nurses had given him something to help with his anxiety.
Detective Hworth pulled out a digital recorder and a notebook. She explained that she was investigating what she termed a “suspicious incident” at our home involving my stepmom and an unidentified male subject.
I walked her through everything, starting from walking into the kitchen with Oliver and thanking Vanessa for the cookies. I described her reaction when I mentioned sharing them, the phone call to the stranger, his arrival, and their conversation.
I detailed how Oliver wasn’t supposed to eat any and how Vanessa had planned for only me to consume them. Detective Hworth took detailed notes, occasionally asking clarifying questions about exact wording or timing.
She asked about my relationship with Vanessa, about any conflicts or money issues, or problems in the family. I told her things had seemed normal, maybe even good, until today.
She asked about my father, and I realized with a jolt that I hadn’t even thought about calling him. He was on a construction site about two hours away, working a big commercial project that had him gone from before dawn until after dinner most days this week.
Detective Hworth said officers had been unable to locate Vanessa or the unidentified male at our house when they’d arrived. Both had apparently fled the scene, which she said was a significant development that suggested consciousness of guilt.
She said they’d issued an “attempt to locate” alert for Vanessa and were working to identify the male subject. In the meantime, she needed to know if I had any idea why my stepmom would want to harm me.
The question sat heavy in the air between us. Why? What had I done? What had changed?
I couldn’t think of anything except a specific memory. “There’s a life insurance policy,” I said slowly, the memory surfacing.
“My dad took one out on me a few years ago after my mom died. He said it was just responsible parenting, making sure there’d be money for funeral expenses and college debt if anything happened to me.” I explained.
“I think it was for $300,000 or something like that,” I added.
Detective Hworth wrote that down, her expression neutral but focused. “Do you know who the beneficiary is?” She asked.
I shook my head. “I assumed my dad, but I was only fifteen when he set it up. I never really thought about it.”
She asked more questions about our family’s financial situation, about Vanessa’s job and income, and about any debts or money problems I was aware of. I told her what little I knew—that dad made decent money in construction management and that Vanessa’s pharmaceutical sales job seemed to pay well.
We lived comfortably but not extravagantly. She asked if there had been any talk of divorce or marital problems.
“Not that I knew of,” I replied.
“Though dad had been working a lot of long hours lately and seemed stressed when he was home.” I admitted.
My father arrived at the hospital around 6 p.m., looking confused and terrified in equal measure. The hospital had called him after we’d been admitted, though they’d apparently been vague about the details.
He rushed to my bedside, then Oliver’s, trying to understand what had happened. I watched his face as Detective Hworth explained the situation—the cookies, Vanessa’s reaction, her flight from the house, and the potential poisoning.
He looked like someone had punched him in the chest, all the air going out of his lungs at once. “That can’t be right,” He kept saying.
“Vanessa would never. She loves these boys. She wouldn’t hurt them.” He insisted.
But there was uncertainty in his voice. It was like he was trying to convince himself as much as the detective.
The Aftermath of the Mask
Dr. Graves returned with preliminary lab results around 7 p.m. His face was grim as he explained that both Oliver and I had elevated levels of antifreeze components in our blood.
He specified it was ethylene glycol, consistent with the ingestion of antifreeze solution. He said antifreeze poisoning was extremely dangerous, potentially fatal if untreated, and could cause kidney failure, brain damage, and death.
The fact that we’d received activated charcoal quickly and that our exposure had been caught early significantly improved our prognosis. But we’d both need treatment with an antidote called fomazole and would require several days of hospitalization.
Monitoring and potential dialysis would be necessary if our kidney function declined. My father looked like he might vomit or pass out.
Oliver was asleep, sedated and unaware of how close he’d come to dying from cookies his mother had baked. Detective Hworth asked my father questions about Vanessa, their relationship, and their finances.
Dad seemed dazed, answering mechanically. They’d been married for two and a half years, and things had been good—or he’d thought they were good.
Vanessa had been affectionate and involved with both boys. She’d never shown any signs of violence or instability.
Yes, they had some debt—credit cards, the mortgage, car payments—but nothing overwhelming. He pulled out his phone and started going through files, looking for the life insurance policy I’d mentioned.
He found it after a few minutes of searching and handed his phone to the detective with shaking hands. Detective Hworth’s expression changed as she read the policy details.
She looked at my father, then at me, then back at the phone screen. “Mr. Barrett, are you aware that this policy lists your wife, Vanessa, as the primary beneficiary, not you?”
My father’s face went blank. “That’s not possible. I took out that policy. I’m the policyholder.”
The detective turned the phone so he could see the screen. “According to this document, which is dated eight months ago, the beneficiary was changed from you to Vanessa Barrett. It shows your electronic signature authorizing the change.”
Dad stared at the screen like it might start making sense if he looked at it long enough. “I never authorized that. I never changed the beneficiary. I didn’t even know you could change beneficiaries without the insured person’s knowledge.”
The detective explained that with certain types of policies, and if someone has access to account passwords and security information, beneficiary changes could be made online or over the phone. She asked if Vanessa had access to my father’s computer or email.
He nodded slowly, still looking shell-shocked. She asked if there were any other policies on me or Oliver.
Dad said there was a smaller policy on Oliver, $100,000, that Vanessa had insisted on when they’d gotten married. He said it was in her name since Oliver was her biological child and she’d handled all the paperwork for it.
Detective Hworth made notes and said she’d be getting warrants for financial records, phone records, and insurance documents. She said this was now being investigated as attempted murder, possibly attempted murder for financial gain.
